Thursday, September 17, 2009

Impulse Dialogue

That swim meet was awesome, said Max to Sean.
I know, I can’t believe we won, said Sean with a huge grin on his face.
Happily Max said, the relay at the end was the craziest… what are we listening to.
Sorry, said Sean, this is what my girlfriend listens to. I know I sound weird but I am starting to kind of like country music. It’s getting fuzzy, you can change it if you want to.
Quickly Max changed it to the reggae station as he said, I can’t believe you would choose fuzzy country over amazing reggae.
After a short pause Sean complained, I’m hungry, do you want to get some food?
Denny’s is open, offered max, let’s stop there.
Sean jokingly said, you need a girlfriend.
I know said max, what’s the deal?
There is your sister. He continued thoughtfully.
No way man, said Sean angrily as Max laughed. That’s not funny.
They had arrived at Denny’s and had just sat down when Sean asked max, what should I get?
I don’t know said Max... I am going these two as he pointed to the two largest things on the menu..
That’s ridiculous, said Sean with a sigh.
I’m starving explained max, you know I eat like a wolverine after swim meets.
You always eat like a wolverine laughed Sean.
After the old decomposing waiter came and left Sean Joked, She was kind of cute, why don’t you ask her out?
That’s disgusting said max, not during dinner.

2 comments:

  1. This needs to be written in a script format. Take out the he said, she saids....replace with a character's name and then the dialogue.

    Max: That swim meet was awesome.
    Sean: I know, I can't believe we won.

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  2. Yeah, fix this and make it a script. I was kind of confused when I read this.

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